Poetry Thursdays- Thursday November 8th

Here’s a poem I wrote today.  I wanted it to be a Haiku, but, you know.  Please feel free to Haiku it in the comments.

My despair is like a flushing toilet

The water spins up higher and higher until I think it’s going to overflow

Then it gets sucked down into the pipes and fills up again to a manageable level.

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Comments

  1. cc says:

    nailed it

  2. Joe Y. says:

    Wow, that was impressive, I had three distinct different feeling in 15 seconds.

    Thank you

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